For me it is more important is to be happy than the money. The money is not the most important thing in the world. But it helps a lot to be happy, you can travel, try different types of food, see places, buy a lot of clothes, buy cars, houses and accessories.
The money if it is important because you need to have good quality of life, you need to eat, you need money to vijar and meet and world, you need money to go out with your friends to the movies, you need money to go shopping, you need money to go a the beach and need a lot of money to go to my country and I can show you how beautiful and rich it is.
In conclusion, I know that money is very important to live but it is not important because the money is never going to be able to buy happiness, family or friends.
I agree, money can't buy happiness! Still, it's fun to dream. For me, it would be great to travel around the world and experience different cultures.
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Money is not the most important thing in the world, but it helps a lot to be happy.
*Also, try not to use too many commas in one sentence - it's better to break up the sentence with a period.